Hey Jas and Zoe,
just want to apologise for not being there for the last week of school but I was so rough I wouldn't have so much as been contributing as falling asleep on your shoulders/the keyboard/everything.
Regarding the track choice - I'm fine with that song (and would've been fine with any of them) so that's all good
Regarding the idea - I'm having trouble seeing why we did all the brainstorming and planning as a group only to decide on an idea thought up by both of you way way way before we even really started the project. I don't particularly like the idea as a whole, though certain aspects I do like.
These aspects are the ones we discussed as a group, such as a possible picnic scene, but the fact that the entirity of the idea has reverted to your initial plan, which I had no part in, makes the whole planning and discussion process completely redundant, with the only contribution of mine to the idea being the girl in the wedding dress, which is taken completely out of context can I add ;)
I just wanted to let you know where I stand and why. What I want out of this project is a music video which I can not only be proud of but also reference as a piece of work that I had creative and technical input into, and I don't feel that I'd get that with this idea.
Also, just wondering why the group had two meetings in my absence, when the week before I was ill we had none?
I know this is some massive bit of holiday reading for you two, sorry about that :D, but I just wanted to get you feedback now at the first chance I've had so we have time to discuss the project over summer ready for when we get back.
Right, that's everything. Talk to you both soon,
Paul x
Monday, 23 July 2007
Friday, 20 July 2007
Possible location
Durnsford Park, Durnsford Road, just up from Bounds Green station.
Photos:

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These photos show a possible place to hang two sheets from in order to do the paint scene. The downsides are that it is not a particularly secluded area, and behind the fence is a nursery school, although its unlikely we would be shooting in school time anyway.

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This photo shows a large field that would be good for filming the picnic scene in, as it looks attractive from most angles, and gives us plenty of room to be creative with our shots.

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These 4 photos all show possible pairs of trees that we could hang a sheet from. The downside of the first 2 is that we would need to cover the path, which wouldnt work very well on a busy day, while the disadvantage of the third is that it's on a slope. The fourth pair of trees seems like it would work the best.

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This photo shows a slope that could be used for some interesting shots, for example people running up or down it.

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This photo shows another aesthetically interesting location that could be used somehow, and would make a nice shot.
The only downside to this park is that it is very public, there is a childrens playground, and the fields are often used for sports. The picture below shows the playground area, and the basketball courts.

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Video:
This video gives more of an idea of how the park looks overall, giving a 360' view from the bottom field.
Photos, video and post by Zoe
Photos:
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These photos show a possible place to hang two sheets from in order to do the paint scene. The downsides are that it is not a particularly secluded area, and behind the fence is a nursery school, although its unlikely we would be shooting in school time anyway.
Full size click HERE
This photo shows a large field that would be good for filming the picnic scene in, as it looks attractive from most angles, and gives us plenty of room to be creative with our shots.
Full size click HERE
Full size click HERE
Full size click HERE
Full size click HERE
These 4 photos all show possible pairs of trees that we could hang a sheet from. The downside of the first 2 is that we would need to cover the path, which wouldnt work very well on a busy day, while the disadvantage of the third is that it's on a slope. The fourth pair of trees seems like it would work the best.
Full size click HERE
This photo shows a slope that could be used for some interesting shots, for example people running up or down it.
Full size click HERE
This photo shows another aesthetically interesting location that could be used somehow, and would make a nice shot.
The only downside to this park is that it is very public, there is a childrens playground, and the fields are often used for sports. The picture below shows the playground area, and the basketball courts.
Full size click HERE
Video:
This video gives more of an idea of how the park looks overall, giving a 360' view from the bottom field.
Photos, video and post by Zoe
Thursday, 19 July 2007
Song Lyrics
Lyrics:
1-11, seconds before music starts, strange noises
11-20, just drum beat
20-29, music no lyrics
29+, lyrics begin
29-39, Verse 1
Translation:
I like a lot of what you do
I like your style,
I like your game
But I know that you can do better
For every day, every night
I play the bass - you play the low one
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - you play the synth
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
I play the bass - also bongos
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - a little banjo
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
Insane success is in the cage to the sharks
Between us why not
Even if that does not serve anything
One knows where you finish your refrains
I say where, I say where?
In the mouth of the morons.
I play the bass - you play the congas
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - a little sitar
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
I play the bass - harmonica
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - also saxo
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
Crazy success is in the cage to the sharks
Between us why not
Even if that does not serve anything
One knows where you finish your refrains
I say where, I say where?
In the mouth of the morons.
This is as well as that
heats from the top down
This is as well as that
Everyone knows the steps
This is as well as that
Play is once more
This is as well as that1,2,3,4
I play the bass - you play the low one
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - you play the synth
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
I play the bass - also the bongos
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - a little banjo
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
Posted by Jasmine
1-11, seconds before music starts, strange noises
11-20, just drum beat
20-29, music no lyrics
29+, lyrics begin
29-39, Verse 1
J'aime beaucoup, c'que tu fais
J'aime ton style, j'aime ton jeu
Mais je sais, que tu peux faire mieux
Car chaque jour, chaque nuit
39-58, chorus
I play the bass - tu joues de la basse
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - tu joues du synthé
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
I play the bass - aussi des bongos
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - un peu de banjo
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
58-1:17, verse 2
Succès fou dans la cage aux requins
Entre nous pourquoi pas
Même si ça ne sert à rien
On sait tous où finissent tes refrains
Dis moi où, dis moi où ?
Dans la bouche des crétins.
1:17-1:37, chorus
I play the bass - tu joues des congas
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - un peu de sitar
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
I play the bass - de l'harmonica
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - aussi du saxo
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
1:37- 1:57, verse 3
Succès fou dans la cage aux requins
Entre nous pourquoi pas
Même si ça ne sert à rien
On sait tous où finissent tes refrains
Dis moi où, dis moi où ?
Dans la bouche des crétins.
1:57- 2:16, change
C'est bien comme ça
Ça chauffe de haut en bas
C'est bien comme ça
Tout le monde connais les pas
C'est bien comme ça
Joue le encore une fois
C'est bien comme ça1,2,3,4 - 2:13-2:16,(1,2,3,4)
2:16-2:35
I play the bass - tu joues de la basse
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - tu joues du synthé
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
I play the bass - aussi des bongos
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - un peu de banjo
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?"
2:35-3:20, faint lyrics
Translation:
I like a lot of what you do
I like your style,
I like your game
But I know that you can do better
For every day, every night
I play the bass - you play the low one
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - you play the synth
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
I play the bass - also bongos
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - a little banjo
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
Insane success is in the cage to the sharks
Between us why not
Even if that does not serve anything
One knows where you finish your refrains
I say where, I say where?
In the mouth of the morons.
I play the bass - you play the congas
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - a little sitar
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
I play the bass - harmonica
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - also saxo
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
Crazy success is in the cage to the sharks
Between us why not
Even if that does not serve anything
One knows where you finish your refrains
I say where, I say where?
In the mouth of the morons.
This is as well as that
heats from the top down
This is as well as that
Everyone knows the steps
This is as well as that
Play is once more
This is as well as that1,2,3,4
I play the bass - you play the low one
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - you play the synth
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
I play the bass - also the bongos
I play the piano - who's gonna sing ?
I play the synth - a little banjo
I play the rhodes - who's gonna sing ?
Posted by Jasmine
Wednesday, 18 July 2007
Scene mood boards
Paint fight scene
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Composed by Jasmine
Lego Scene
Full size click HERE
Composed by Zoe
Strange guest/Picnic scene
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Composed by Jasmine
Composed by Jasmine
Draft Location Search
Ridgeway park
For 'Strange Guest' Scene
For 'Paint fight' scene


Pros:
- Has a miniture train, running on sundays possibly to use in crazy antics on picnic
-Large open spaces
- foresty area
- many idfferent ally ways
Cons:
- Usually busy and many people often playing on field
- People may get in way
- There are park wardens
- near residentual area
Mansfield Park
For 'Strange Guest' Scene
For 'Paint fight' scene


Pros:
- David Beckam played football here
- Does not usually get very busy
- Hills
- has a flowere garden
Cons:
- Quite open
- Overlooked by a few flats and there is a resevoir in sight, may get in shot
- poor quality grass, patchy
Larkswood Playing Fields
For 'Strange Guest' Scene
For 'Paint fight' scene
Pro's
- Large space
- not very busy
Cons:
- Accesibility
Composed by Jasmine
PAUL
We have had a meeting with Ms Blackborow, and she has approved the idea.
We need to know if you're happy with it so we can move on.
PLEASE blog your response ASAP
Zoe and Jasmine
We need to know if you're happy with it so we can move on.
PLEASE blog your response ASAP
Zoe and Jasmine
Meeting Four
Meeting Four
Present: Zoe and Jasmine (Paul absent)
Agenda:
- Disucss final idea in more detail, and specifically:
- Think of more 'strange guests' and who could possibly play them
- Discuss costumes
Picnic Couple
Boy:
Who could play them? Paul
Costume? Either all in black with neon accessories, or dressed in completely normal, plain clothes
Where from? Paul
Girl:
Who could play them? Beaty
Costume? Either all in black with neon accessories, or dressed in completely normal, plain clothes
Where from? Beaty
Strange Guests
Magician: Performs traditional magic tricks, but wrong. See example in previous meeting notes.
Who could play them? Coryan, Ben Blume
Costume? Shirt, suit, bow tie, top hat, wand
Where from? Ask Coryan, or make some of it, ie wand
Clown: Traditional pranks. See example in previous meeting notes
Who could play them? Sezan
Costume? Wig (orange), brightly coloured clothes, dungarees, crazy tie, loads of make-up
Where from? Ask Hannah about dungarees, find rest of items from around our houses
Tutu people: Women wearing tutus and fairy wings, who blow bubbles/throw glitter or confetti
Who could play them? Zoe and Jasmine, Hannah
Costume? One purple tutu and wings, one pink tutu and wings, possibly one white tutu and wings. Pink and purple eyeshadow and nail varnish, possibly fake eyelashes
Where from? Zoe and Jasmine, possibly Hannah
Bunnies: Women dressed as bunnies, playing clap games in the background
Who could play them? Elanor, Hannah
Costume? Bunny ears, pink noses, white jeans, white shirts/t-shirts
Where from? Zoe, Jasmine, Elanor, Hannah
Pirate: Trying to scare picnic couple, they don't react
Who could play them? Ally, Emily
Costume? Pirate hat and bandana, white shirt, black waistcoat, black trousers, sword
Where from? Zoe - Hat, Jasmine - Bandana, Ally - other
Bride: Running around in her dress
Who could play them? Steph, Toni
Costume? Bride-like dress
Where from? Pauls sister
Person in a toga: Walking around eating grapes/throwing grapes at the picnic couple
Who could play them? Zahra, Ezinne
Costume? Toga
Where from? Use a white sheet
Targets:
- Ask possible actors if they would like to be in it
- Ask people about costumes, start gathering clothing and props
Discussed by Zoe and Jasmine
Typed by Zoe
Present: Zoe and Jasmine (Paul absent)
Agenda:
- Disucss final idea in more detail, and specifically:
- Think of more 'strange guests' and who could possibly play them
- Discuss costumes
Picnic Couple
Boy:
Who could play them? Paul
Costume? Either all in black with neon accessories, or dressed in completely normal, plain clothes
Where from? Paul
Girl:
Who could play them? Beaty
Costume? Either all in black with neon accessories, or dressed in completely normal, plain clothes
Where from? Beaty
Strange Guests
Magician: Performs traditional magic tricks, but wrong. See example in previous meeting notes.
Who could play them? Coryan, Ben Blume
Costume? Shirt, suit, bow tie, top hat, wand
Where from? Ask Coryan, or make some of it, ie wand
Clown: Traditional pranks. See example in previous meeting notes
Who could play them? Sezan
Costume? Wig (orange), brightly coloured clothes, dungarees, crazy tie, loads of make-up
Where from? Ask Hannah about dungarees, find rest of items from around our houses
Tutu people: Women wearing tutus and fairy wings, who blow bubbles/throw glitter or confetti
Who could play them? Zoe and Jasmine, Hannah
Costume? One purple tutu and wings, one pink tutu and wings, possibly one white tutu and wings. Pink and purple eyeshadow and nail varnish, possibly fake eyelashes
Where from? Zoe and Jasmine, possibly Hannah
Bunnies: Women dressed as bunnies, playing clap games in the background
Who could play them? Elanor, Hannah
Costume? Bunny ears, pink noses, white jeans, white shirts/t-shirts
Where from? Zoe, Jasmine, Elanor, Hannah
Pirate: Trying to scare picnic couple, they don't react
Who could play them? Ally, Emily
Costume? Pirate hat and bandana, white shirt, black waistcoat, black trousers, sword
Where from? Zoe - Hat, Jasmine - Bandana, Ally - other
Bride: Running around in her dress
Who could play them? Steph, Toni
Costume? Bride-like dress
Where from? Pauls sister
Person in a toga: Walking around eating grapes/throwing grapes at the picnic couple
Who could play them? Zahra, Ezinne
Costume? Toga
Where from? Use a white sheet
Targets:
- Ask possible actors if they would like to be in it
- Ask people about costumes, start gathering clothing and props
Discussed by Zoe and Jasmine
Typed by Zoe
Tuesday, 17 July 2007
Last 3 Track Choices
Prototypes - Who's gonna sing?
For The Girl - The Fratellis
Country Boys and City Girls - The Fratellis
Poseted by Jasmine
Meeting 3
17/07/07
Present: Zoe, Jasmine
Agenda:
-Final Track Choice
-Further discussion of Final Idea
Final Track agreed on; Who's gonna sing? - Prototypes
Ask miss B for confirmation
Brief synopsis of Final Idea
Beginning:
Lego at beginning, close up, and hands playing with it, bright colour nails, close up of her nails. Mainly wearing black, contrasting with lego and her nails.
For the verses
Real life recreation of what she was creating with the lego, picnic scene. Boy and girl having a picnic, everything looks really normal at first.
Then strange guests arrive, poking their heads from behind of a tree, the two picnic people carry on as normal. The strange guests run around the tree and picnic area, sped up editing.
Magician doing a failed magic act, for example; tries to pull a rabbit out of a hat, it turns out to be a cat.
Clown: Doing typical clown acts; for example squirting water at the picnic couple, but they don’t react.
Tutu woman; blowing bubbles/ confetti
When the chorus comes;
Change from green background, cross zoom, to white background. White sheet back drop and one on the floor, the couple have a paint fight with poster paints.
Ending:
Go back to the lego person fallen asleep.
Targets: scout parks and take photos of possible locations.
Think about possible characters and actors for next meeting
Discussed by Zoe and Jasmine
Typed by Jasmine
Present: Zoe, Jasmine
Agenda:
-Final Track Choice
-Further discussion of Final Idea
Final Track agreed on; Who's gonna sing? - Prototypes
Ask miss B for confirmation
Brief synopsis of Final Idea
Beginning:
Lego at beginning, close up, and hands playing with it, bright colour nails, close up of her nails. Mainly wearing black, contrasting with lego and her nails.
For the verses
Real life recreation of what she was creating with the lego, picnic scene. Boy and girl having a picnic, everything looks really normal at first.
Then strange guests arrive, poking their heads from behind of a tree, the two picnic people carry on as normal. The strange guests run around the tree and picnic area, sped up editing.
Magician doing a failed magic act, for example; tries to pull a rabbit out of a hat, it turns out to be a cat.
Clown: Doing typical clown acts; for example squirting water at the picnic couple, but they don’t react.
Tutu woman; blowing bubbles/ confetti
When the chorus comes;
Change from green background, cross zoom, to white background. White sheet back drop and one on the floor, the couple have a paint fight with poster paints.
Ending:
Go back to the lego person fallen asleep.
Targets: scout parks and take photos of possible locations.
Think about possible characters and actors for next meeting
Discussed by Zoe and Jasmine
Typed by Jasmine
Monday, 16 July 2007
blk feedback!
lovin' this blog - it's a delight to read and look at so well done! clearly there are postings from zoe and jasmine on behalf of the group, so come on paul, lets see some from you too!
group target: final track and idea decision by the end of the week?
check out all the info on the main blog, come and hunt me down to book your slot
once a decision is made, you could start to develop lots of inspirational links on the blog - film clips, music vids, artwork - anything that has a similar visual style to the one in your heads. you could treat the blog as a kind of moodboard if you like.
keep up the good work
ms b x
group target: final track and idea decision by the end of the week?
check out all the info on the main blog, come and hunt me down to book your slot
once a decision is made, you could start to develop lots of inspirational links on the blog - film clips, music vids, artwork - anything that has a similar visual style to the one in your heads. you could treat the blog as a kind of moodboard if you like.
keep up the good work
ms b x
Monday, 9 July 2007
Brainstorms for our final song choices
Friday, 6 July 2007
Final List
Country Boys and City Girls - Fratellis
For the Girl - Fratellis
Who's gonna sing? - Prototypes
About your dress - The Maccabees
One week - Barenaked ladies
Country Boys and City Girls Vs For the Girl
Jas: Country Boys and City Girls
Paul: For the Girl
Zoe: Country Boys and City Girls
Country Boys and City Girls Vs Who's gonna sing?
Jas: Country Boys and City Girls
Paul: Who's gonna sing?
Zoe: Country Boys and City Girls
Country Boys and City Girls Vs About your dress
Jas: Country Boys and City Girls
Paul: Country Boys and City Girls
Zoe: Country Boys and City Girls
Country Boys and City Girls Vs One week
Jas: Country Boys and City Girls
Paul: Country Boys and City Girls
Zoe: Country Boys and City Girls
For the Girl Vs Who's gonna sing?
Jas: For the Girl
Paul: Who's gonna sing?
Zoe: For the Girl
For the Girl Vs About your dress
Jas: For the Girl
Paul: For the Girl
Zoe: About your dress
For the Girl Vs One week
Jas: For the Girl
Paul: For the Girl
Zoe: One week
Who's gonna sing? Vs About your dress
Jas: About your dress
Paul: Who's gonna sing
Zoe: About your dress
Who's gonna sing? Vs One week
Jas: One week
Paul: Who's gonna sing?
Zoe: One week
Results:
Country Boys and City Girls - 10
For the Girl - 6
Who's gonna sing? - 4
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About your dress - 3
One week - 3
For the Girl - Fratellis
Who's gonna sing? - Prototypes
About your dress - The Maccabees
One week - Barenaked ladies
Country Boys and City Girls Vs For the Girl
Jas: Country Boys and City Girls
Paul: For the Girl
Zoe: Country Boys and City Girls
Country Boys and City Girls Vs Who's gonna sing?
Jas: Country Boys and City Girls
Paul: Who's gonna sing?
Zoe: Country Boys and City Girls
Country Boys and City Girls Vs About your dress
Jas: Country Boys and City Girls
Paul: Country Boys and City Girls
Zoe: Country Boys and City Girls
Country Boys and City Girls Vs One week
Jas: Country Boys and City Girls
Paul: Country Boys and City Girls
Zoe: Country Boys and City Girls
For the Girl Vs Who's gonna sing?
Jas: For the Girl
Paul: Who's gonna sing?
Zoe: For the Girl
For the Girl Vs About your dress
Jas: For the Girl
Paul: For the Girl
Zoe: About your dress
For the Girl Vs One week
Jas: For the Girl
Paul: For the Girl
Zoe: One week
Who's gonna sing? Vs About your dress
Jas: About your dress
Paul: Who's gonna sing
Zoe: About your dress
Who's gonna sing? Vs One week
Jas: One week
Paul: Who's gonna sing?
Zoe: One week
Results:
Country Boys and City Girls - 10
For the Girl - 6
Who's gonna sing? - 4
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About your dress - 3
One week - 3
Typed By Jasmine xx
Eliminating round 2
Country Boys and City Girls - Fratellis
For the Girl - Fratellis
Who's gonna sing? - Prototypes
Bohemian like you -Dandy Warhols
Processed beats - Kasabian
About your dress - the maccabees
Automatic -Dead Disco
Place you hands - Reef
A message to you Rudy - Specials
The Start Of something - Voxtrot
One week - Barenaked ladies
Jasmine:
My Yes's:
Country Boys and City Girls - Fratellis
Who's gonna sing? - Prototypes
Processed beats - Kasabian
My No's:
The Start Of something - Voxtrot
Automatic -Dead Disco
Bohemian like you -Dandy Warhols
Paul:
My Yes's:
My No's:
A message to you Rudy - Specials
The Start Of something - Voxtrot
About your dress - the maccabees
Zoe:
My Yes's:
Country Boys and City Girls - Fratellis
about your dress - the maccabees
One week - Barenaked ladies
My No's:
Who's gonna sing? - Prototypes
Automatic -Dead Disco
Bohemian like you -Dandy Warhols
Voted rejects:
Automatic -Dead Disco
Bohemian like you -Dandy Warhols
The Start Of something - Voxtrot
Discussed rejects
A message to you Rudy - Specials
Place you hands - Reef
Processed beats - Kasabian
Typed By Jasmine
For the Girl - Fratellis
Who's gonna sing? - Prototypes
Bohemian like you -Dandy Warhols
Processed beats - Kasabian
About your dress - the maccabees
Automatic -Dead Disco
Place you hands - Reef
A message to you Rudy - Specials
The Start Of something - Voxtrot
One week - Barenaked ladies
Jasmine:
My Yes's:
Country Boys and City Girls - Fratellis
Who's gonna sing? - Prototypes
Processed beats - Kasabian
My No's:
The Start Of something - Voxtrot
Automatic -Dead Disco
Bohemian like you -Dandy Warhols
Paul:
My Yes's:
Country Boys and City Girls - Fratellis / For the Girl - Fratellis
Who's gonna sing? - Prototypes
Automatic -Dead Disco
My No's:
A message to you Rudy - Specials
The Start Of something - Voxtrot
About your dress - the maccabees
Zoe:
My Yes's:
Country Boys and City Girls - Fratellis
about your dress - the maccabees
One week - Barenaked ladies
My No's:
Who's gonna sing? - Prototypes
Automatic -Dead Disco
Bohemian like you -Dandy Warhols
Voted rejects:
Automatic -Dead Disco
Bohemian like you -Dandy Warhols
The Start Of something - Voxtrot
Discussed rejects
A message to you Rudy - Specials
Place you hands - Reef
Processed beats - Kasabian
Typed By Jasmine
Thursday, 5 July 2007
New Song Ideas
Country Boys and City Girls - Fratellis
Lyrics:8/10
Creativity:9/10
Likeabilty:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 9/10
Total: 42/50
Video already? No
For the Girl - Fratellis
Lyrics:7/10
Creativity:8/10
Likeabilty:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 8/10
Total: 39/50
Video already? No
Typed by Jasmine
Lyrics:8/10
Creativity:9/10
Likeabilty:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 9/10
Total: 42/50
Video already? No
For the Girl - Fratellis
Lyrics:7/10
Creativity:8/10
Likeabilty:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 8/10
Total: 39/50
Video already? No
Typed by Jasmine
Tuesday, 3 July 2007
Eliminating Songs: Round One
Where is my mind? - Pixies
Because: Zoe and Jasmine particularly don't like it, and because it received the lowest overall score.
Tell Me - The Moths
Because: No-one particularly liked it, and because it received the second-lowest overall score due to the focus on lyrics.
Dancing in the Moonlight - Toploader
Because: Although we like the song, we believe it already has an institutional image, and people will focus too much on the song rather than on our video
California - The Kooks
Because: The lyrics would have had to be quite a focus, and we believed the conventions of the genre would be too hard to stray from
The Narcissist - The Libertines
Because: Jasmine and Paul preffered the other songs on the Possibles list
Discussed by the whole group, typed by Zoe
Because: Zoe and Jasmine particularly don't like it, and because it received the lowest overall score.
Tell Me - The Moths
Because: No-one particularly liked it, and because it received the second-lowest overall score due to the focus on lyrics.
Dancing in the Moonlight - Toploader
Because: Although we like the song, we believe it already has an institutional image, and people will focus too much on the song rather than on our video
California - The Kooks
Because: The lyrics would have had to be quite a focus, and we believed the conventions of the genre would be too hard to stray from
The Narcissist - The Libertines
Because: Jasmine and Paul preffered the other songs on the Possibles list
Discussed by the whole group, typed by Zoe
Final Possible Song Choices
Who's Gonna Sing? - Prototypes
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 7/10
Likeability:
Jas: 7/10
Paul: 9/10
Zoe: 6/10
Total: 36/50
Video already? Yes (unreleased)
Bohemian Like You - Dandy Warhols
Lyrics: 6/10
Creativity: 5/10
Likeability:
Jas: 7/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 7/10
Total: 33/50
Video already? Yes (released)
Where Is My Mind? - Pixies
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 5/10
Likeability:
Jas: 4/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 5/10
Total: 27/50
Video already? No
Processed Beats - Kasabian
Lyrics: 8/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 8/10
Total: 38/50
Video already? Yes (released)
About Your Dress - Maccabees
Lyrics: 4/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 7/10
Zoe: 9/10
Total: 34/50
Video already? Yes (unreleased? definitely unknown)
Tell Me - The Moths
Lyrics: 5/10
Creativity: 5/10
Likeability:
Jas: 6/10
Paul: 7/10
Zoe: 5/10
Total: 28/50
Video already? No
Automatic - Dead Disco
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 5/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 7/10
Total: 33/50
Video already? Yes (released? but definitely unknown)
Place Your Hands - Reef
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 8/10
Total: 37/50
Video already? Yes (relelased)
Dancing in The Moonlight - Toploader
Lyrics: 4/10
Creativity: 5/10
Likeability:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 6/10
Zoe: 8/10
Total: 31/50
Video already? Yes (released)
A Message to you Rudy - The Specials
Lyrics: 8/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 6/10
Zoe: 8/10
Total: 36/50
Video already? Yes (really old, unlikely to be remembered)
The Narcissist - The Libertines
Lyrics: 6/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 6/10
Paul: 6/10
Zoe: 7/10
Total: 31/50
Video already? No
California - The Kooks
Lyrics: 6/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 5/10
Paul: 6/10
Zoe: 8/10
Total: 31/50
Video already? No
The Start of Something - Voxtrot
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 7/10
Likeability:
Jas: 4/10
Paul: 7/10
Zoe: 9/10
Total: 34/50
Video already? No
Creeping up the Backstairs - The Fratelli's
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 7/10
Likeability:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 9/10
Total: 39/50
Video already? Yes (released? but relatively unknown)
One Week - Barenaked Ladies
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 8/10
Likeability:
Jas: 7/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 9/10
Total: 39/50
Video already? Yes (released, but relatively unknown)
Discussed by the whole group, typed by Zoe
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 7/10
Likeability:
Jas: 7/10
Paul: 9/10
Zoe: 6/10
Total: 36/50
Video already? Yes (unreleased)
Bohemian Like You - Dandy Warhols
Lyrics: 6/10
Creativity: 5/10
Likeability:
Jas: 7/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 7/10
Total: 33/50
Video already? Yes (released)
Where Is My Mind? - Pixies
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 5/10
Likeability:
Jas: 4/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 5/10
Total: 27/50
Video already? No
Processed Beats - Kasabian
Lyrics: 8/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 8/10
Total: 38/50
Video already? Yes (released)
About Your Dress - Maccabees
Lyrics: 4/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 7/10
Zoe: 9/10
Total: 34/50
Video already? Yes (unreleased? definitely unknown)
Tell Me - The Moths
Lyrics: 5/10
Creativity: 5/10
Likeability:
Jas: 6/10
Paul: 7/10
Zoe: 5/10
Total: 28/50
Video already? No
Automatic - Dead Disco
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 5/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 7/10
Total: 33/50
Video already? Yes (released? but definitely unknown)
Place Your Hands - Reef
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 8/10
Total: 37/50
Video already? Yes (relelased)
Dancing in The Moonlight - Toploader
Lyrics: 4/10
Creativity: 5/10
Likeability:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 6/10
Zoe: 8/10
Total: 31/50
Video already? Yes (released)
A Message to you Rudy - The Specials
Lyrics: 8/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 6/10
Zoe: 8/10
Total: 36/50
Video already? Yes (really old, unlikely to be remembered)
The Narcissist - The Libertines
Lyrics: 6/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 6/10
Paul: 6/10
Zoe: 7/10
Total: 31/50
Video already? No
California - The Kooks
Lyrics: 6/10
Creativity: 6/10
Likeability:
Jas: 5/10
Paul: 6/10
Zoe: 8/10
Total: 31/50
Video already? No
The Start of Something - Voxtrot
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 7/10
Likeability:
Jas: 4/10
Paul: 7/10
Zoe: 9/10
Total: 34/50
Video already? No
Creeping up the Backstairs - The Fratelli's
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 7/10
Likeability:
Jas: 8/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 9/10
Total: 39/50
Video already? Yes (released? but relatively unknown)
One Week - Barenaked Ladies
Lyrics: 7/10
Creativity: 8/10
Likeability:
Jas: 7/10
Paul: 8/10
Zoe: 9/10
Total: 39/50
Video already? Yes (released, but relatively unknown)
Discussed by the whole group, typed by Zoe
Meeting Two Notes
Meeting Two
Date and Time: Tuesday 3rd July, 9:30 - 10:50
Members Present: All
Focus: Further Song Discussion and reduction to 10 final choices
Suggested Songs
Paul
Mr Brightside: Too well known song/video (2004)
Who's Gonna Sing?: Already has a video (not well known) - Possibility
Rock 'n' Roll Queen: Too well known song/video
Devil: Group didn't like song
Bohemian Like You: Group likes song, already has a video - Possibility
A Little Respect: Quite well known song/video, quite old (pre '00s)
Where is my Mind: No video, textual link with Fight Club, Paul/Zoe like song, Jasmine unsure - Possibility
Processed Beats: Has a video (not well known), group likes song - Possibility
Jasmine
Je Veux Te Voir: Zoe doesn't like the fact it's in french, group likes song
First Love: Famous song/video
Lego: Better song choices, not too famous
About your dress: Has a good video, group likes song, recent - Possibility
Spit at Stars: Video already, restrictive due to dominance of lyrics
Backfire at the Disco: No video, group likes song, restrictive due to dominance of lyrics
Tell Me: No video, group likes song, some restrictive due to dominance of lyrics - Possibility
Good Shoes: Not a famous video, group doesn't like the song
October First Account: Not lively enough, weird song
Bucky: Too hard, Zoe and Jasmine like the song, Paul didn't
Zoe
I Believe: Has a video (but only a promo), not sure about song
Dreadlock Holiday: Has a video (quite old), famous song, difficult genre of music
Flowers: No video, Jasmine really likes the song, limitations of genre
Car: Has a video (quite old), famous song
Automatic: Has a video (not famous), group likes song - Possibility
Pop the Glock: No video, Jasmine and Zoe likes the song, Paul didn't
I go hard, I go home: No video, heavy electro, no lyrics
Place Your Hands: Good song, has a video
Dancing in the Moonlight: Has a video (quite old), good song - Possibility
One Horse Town: Has a video, Paul and Zoe like song, Jasmine didn't
Someday: Famous song/video, group likes song - Possibility
A Message To You Rudy: Group likes song, famous song/video, quite old
The Guilt: Explicit language
The Narcissist: Group likes song, no video
California: No video, group likes song, restrictive due to dominance of lyrics
The Start of Something: Group likes song, no video - Possibility
Gotta Reason: Paul and Zoe like song, Jasmine didn't, no video
Creeping up the Backstairs: Group likes song, has a video - Possibility
One Week: Group likes song, has a video (old, not famous), song is famous - Possibility
Pinch Me: Group likes song, has a video
Targets for next meeting
To come up with initial ideas for the contents of the video
Disscussed by whole group, written and typed by Paul
Date and Time: Tuesday 3rd July, 9:30 - 10:50
Members Present: All
Focus: Further Song Discussion and reduction to 10 final choices
Suggested Songs
Paul
Mr Brightside: Too well known song/video (2004)
Who's Gonna Sing?: Already has a video (not well known) - Possibility
Rock 'n' Roll Queen: Too well known song/video
Devil: Group didn't like song
Bohemian Like You: Group likes song, already has a video - Possibility
A Little Respect: Quite well known song/video, quite old (pre '00s)
Where is my Mind: No video, textual link with Fight Club, Paul/Zoe like song, Jasmine unsure - Possibility
Processed Beats: Has a video (not well known), group likes song - Possibility
Jasmine
Je Veux Te Voir: Zoe doesn't like the fact it's in french, group likes song
First Love: Famous song/video
Lego: Better song choices, not too famous
About your dress: Has a good video, group likes song, recent - Possibility
Spit at Stars: Video already, restrictive due to dominance of lyrics
Backfire at the Disco: No video, group likes song, restrictive due to dominance of lyrics
Tell Me: No video, group likes song, some restrictive due to dominance of lyrics - Possibility
Good Shoes: Not a famous video, group doesn't like the song
October First Account: Not lively enough, weird song
Bucky: Too hard, Zoe and Jasmine like the song, Paul didn't
Zoe
I Believe: Has a video (but only a promo), not sure about song
Dreadlock Holiday: Has a video (quite old), famous song, difficult genre of music
Flowers: No video, Jasmine really likes the song, limitations of genre
Car: Has a video (quite old), famous song
Automatic: Has a video (not famous), group likes song - Possibility
Pop the Glock: No video, Jasmine and Zoe likes the song, Paul didn't
I go hard, I go home: No video, heavy electro, no lyrics
Place Your Hands: Good song, has a video
Dancing in the Moonlight: Has a video (quite old), good song - Possibility
One Horse Town: Has a video, Paul and Zoe like song, Jasmine didn't
Someday: Famous song/video, group likes song - Possibility
A Message To You Rudy: Group likes song, famous song/video, quite old
The Guilt: Explicit language
The Narcissist: Group likes song, no video
California: No video, group likes song, restrictive due to dominance of lyrics
The Start of Something: Group likes song, no video - Possibility
Gotta Reason: Paul and Zoe like song, Jasmine didn't, no video
Creeping up the Backstairs: Group likes song, has a video - Possibility
One Week: Group likes song, has a video (old, not famous), song is famous - Possibility
Pinch Me: Group likes song, has a video
Targets for next meeting
To come up with initial ideas for the contents of the video
Disscussed by whole group, written and typed by Paul
Meeting One Notes
Meeting One
Date and Time: Monday 2nd July, 9:30 - 10:50
Members present: All
Focus: Song Discussion/Aims and targets for the brief and overall project
Aims:
- To produce an effective modern music video which fits the criteria of the brief
- For our music video to be unusual, and draw in the target audience
Possible songs:
Song for Clay - Bloc Party (Paul)
Patins - CSS (Zoe)
Song 1: Bloc Party
Pros
- Easy song to fit different styles of video to (ie narrative- or performance-based)
- Good rhythm
Cons
- Lyrics are hard to understand
- Too heavy/rocky - we believe this genre has too many conventions, and so we wouldn't be able to construct an obscure narrative, which was one of our aims
Song 2: CSS
Pros
- Unusual song and different style - allows us to comply with our aim of producing a more unusual and obscure video
- Lack of conventions for genre allows originality and creativity
Cons
- Focus isn't on the lyrics
End Result
We decided that, as one member of the group didn't like the CSS song and another member of the group didn't like the Bloc Party song, we would say no to both for now and try to think of some other possibilities which would appeal more to all members of the group
Other Choices
Space and the Woods - Late of the Pier (Zoe)
Pop the Glock - Uffie (Zoe)
Rebellion Lies - ArcadeFire (Paul)
We then decided to discuss genre, making lists of genres we didn't particularly want to work with, genres that were possible, and genres that we particularly liked.
Dislike:
- Grime (too difficult)
- Rap (too difficult)
- Dance (too difficult)
- Hard Rock (too many existing conventions)
- Country and Western (not modern enough)
Possible:
- Techno
- Drum and Bass
- Reggae
Like:
- Indie
- Nu-rave
- Alternative
Targets for next meeting:
- Each member of the group should compile a list of at least 10 possible song choices on their blog
- Each member of the group should do an ideas brainstorm or a synopsis for one idea on their blog
Discussed by whole group, scribed by Zoe and Paul, typed by Zoe
Date and Time: Monday 2nd July, 9:30 - 10:50
Members present: All
Focus: Song Discussion/Aims and targets for the brief and overall project
Aims:
- To produce an effective modern music video which fits the criteria of the brief
- For our music video to be unusual, and draw in the target audience
Possible songs:
Song for Clay - Bloc Party (Paul)
Patins - CSS (Zoe)
Song 1: Bloc Party
Pros
- Easy song to fit different styles of video to (ie narrative- or performance-based)
- Good rhythm
Cons
- Lyrics are hard to understand
- Too heavy/rocky - we believe this genre has too many conventions, and so we wouldn't be able to construct an obscure narrative, which was one of our aims
Song 2: CSS
Pros
- Unusual song and different style - allows us to comply with our aim of producing a more unusual and obscure video
- Lack of conventions for genre allows originality and creativity
Cons
- Focus isn't on the lyrics
End Result
We decided that, as one member of the group didn't like the CSS song and another member of the group didn't like the Bloc Party song, we would say no to both for now and try to think of some other possibilities which would appeal more to all members of the group
Other Choices
Space and the Woods - Late of the Pier (Zoe)
Pop the Glock - Uffie (Zoe)
Rebellion Lies - ArcadeFire (Paul)
We then decided to discuss genre, making lists of genres we didn't particularly want to work with, genres that were possible, and genres that we particularly liked.
Dislike:
- Grime (too difficult)
- Rap (too difficult)
- Dance (too difficult)
- Hard Rock (too many existing conventions)
- Country and Western (not modern enough)
Possible:
- Techno
- Drum and Bass
- Reggae
Like:
- Indie
- Nu-rave
- Alternative
Targets for next meeting:
- Each member of the group should compile a list of at least 10 possible song choices on their blog
- Each member of the group should do an ideas brainstorm or a synopsis for one idea on their blog
Discussed by whole group, scribed by Zoe and Paul, typed by Zoe
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