Paul's Response

Hey Jas and Zoe,
just want to apologise for not being there for the last week of school but I was so rough I wouldn't have so much as been contributing as falling asleep on your shoulders/the keyboard/everything.

Regarding the track choice - I'm fine with that song (and would've been fine with any of them) so that's all good

Regarding the idea - I'm having trouble seeing why we did all the brainstorming and planning as a group only to decide on an idea thought up by both of you way way way before we even really started the project. I don't particularly like the idea as a whole, though certain aspects I do like.

These aspects are the ones we discussed as a group, such as a possible picnic scene, but the fact that the entirity of the idea has reverted to your initial plan, which I had no part in, makes the whole planning and discussion process completely redundant, with the only contribution of mine to the idea being the girl in the wedding dress, which is taken completely out of context can I add ;)

I just wanted to let you know where I stand and why. What I want out of this project is a music video which I can not only be proud of but also reference as a piece of work that I had creative and technical input into, and I don't feel that I'd get that with this idea.

Also, just wondering why the group had two meetings in my absence, when the week before I was ill we had none?

I know this is some massive bit of holiday reading for you two, sorry about that :D, but I just wanted to get you feedback now at the first chance I've had so we have time to discuss the project over summer ready for when we get back.

Right, that's everything. Talk to you both soon,
Paul x